I am starting a self taught school to help myself learn the ropes of character design and concept design. It's about 5 months long, the course designed by me, with the help of a couple of dedicated friends grading my work, giving me advice. I really appreciate any advice from anyone!
The mountain in the middle ground loses description slightly, I think, and the shadows at its bottom have the effect of making it look rather log-like. The simple solution is either to not lose its peak entirely to the left edge of the picture, or suggest smaller peaks and tiers on its right slope.